Chapter 1: The Device Awakens
This read like Stranger Things meets Borges — in the best possible way.
The “HELLO, DANIEL” moment genuinely gave me chills. That slow creep from museum boredom to world-bending weirdness was so well done.
Also, the way the world kind of exhales? Felt that.
I would 100% have touched the artifact too — no regrets.
Subbed. Bring on chapter 2
https://substack.com/@joshcion/note/c-140261829
Like it, don't understand
Haha — that honestly means a lot, Scott.
Some stories are more “feel it now, decode it later,” y’know?
Appreciate you sticking with the mystery.
This read like Stranger Things meets Borges — in the best possible way.
The “HELLO, DANIEL” moment genuinely gave me chills. That slow creep from museum boredom to world-bending weirdness was so well done.
Also, the way the world kind of exhales? Felt that.
I would 100% have touched the artifact too — no regrets.
Subbed. Bring on chapter 2
https://substack.com/@joshcion/note/c-140261829
Like it, don't understand
Haha — that honestly means a lot, Scott.
Some stories are more “feel it now, decode it later,” y’know?
Appreciate you sticking with the mystery.